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I don't want to sink
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I'm kind of trying to develop a new poetic style, riffing off the bop with some additions from elsewhere. So whilst this is technically freeform, it follows a set of rules I'm working on. The 1 4 couplet is core to holding it together, so glad you spotted it. It should be the strongest couplet in each stanza so I still need to work on my word choice I see Smile
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I don't want to sink - by Kyrios - 06-21-2016, 10:44 AM
RE: I don't want to sink - by Lexirific - 06-21-2016, 10:58 AM
RE: I don't want to sink - by Cuylie - 06-22-2016, 02:17 AM
RE: I don't want to sink - by Kyrios - 06-22-2016, 02:29 PM

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