The Challenge

[Haakon]

I wish to feel you all tonight
On top of me without riddles
And hide my face between your breasts
Cares them, taste your nipples.

From sweet and bitten lips of yours
My kiss will rip desire moans
They'll drown me deep inside your eyes
And call into your loins.

I want to firmly squeeze your thighs
And deeply penetrate your cunt
And raid it like a hurricane
And fill it with my spunk.

At climax of this passion ride
You’ll fall into my chest
And our pounding breathless hearts
Will fuse into a nest...

[-J-]

Let's run with Haakon's poem and see who else comes along...

Topic: Desire!
Form: Must include four stanzas of the same kind (poet's choice).


You've left me every night wanting
Just one more moment.
You've left me every morning wanting
Just one more hour with you.

I see the angles of your face and I want
Just one more look.
Hearing you gets my ear to twitch and I want
Just one more sound from you.

Every time I get into it with you, I need
Just one more taste.
Every time I become one with you, I need
Just one more round with you!

What do I do when you're not there?
When I know nothing compares to you?
What do I do to fill up the void
Even when you leave me so annoyed and
Frustrated?

I think of you

And wait

Just one more time.

[Haakon]

I wish that you came back online.
I stare dully at your status,
Re-living our wildest times,
Not knowing what had come between us.

I wish that you came back online.
Your silly avatar’s grayed out
You left not even saying “Bye”
I wonder why I got left out

I wish that you came back online.
Ignoring messages, invites
And other friends begin to ask
“Log off and go to other sites!”

I wish that you came back online.
So we could have that chat and banter,
To see that cutie smiley face
You end each sentence with for laughter.

I wish that you came back online.
And real life no longer matters...

Oh my!
           New message:
                                  “Hi ”...

[-J-]

Let's give this another go!

Need to stick in

Your tuppence?

Stop! Or

You'll never get

Comeuppance

Burma-Shave

Burma-Shave was a company famous for the funny jingles on its roadside billboards. These were placed in groups of six rhyming pretty much as above, and "Burma-Shave" always as the last line.

Style is Burma-Shave jingles. Theme is Advice. Go nuts!

[Aneurismath]

Here I came to show off and you just start breaking my balls, John!

When too tough
gets the game,
hard you try
to avail...
Why not buy
Burma-Shave

[Altaria]

To this moment
Thou shall drink
To a glorious moment
One shall dream

[_Barbie_]

Does everyone know Myanmar?
Is actually very far?
Half the world you'll pave,
Across the ocean's wave,
But proving you're that brave,
You can then try,
Burma-Shave!

[Aneurismath]

Okay, GAME ON!
I am going to use my right to change rules now, let's see how this plays out...

Style is still Burma-Shave jingles. Theme is... None! FREESTYLE, DAWGS!

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Like a Hobo,
like Madonna,
have to shave it
so I'm gonna.
Now I'm shakin'
Burma-Shave

[-J-]

I always know
When it will rain.
I just go out
With my umbrella
Left home again.
Burma-Shave

[Aneurismath]

When you are
tired of life,
you don't need
no advice.
Fuck them all
Burma-Shave