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Detective of secrets II: Ball-an-itis
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Hello!
Hi, it's me again. Your story was really funny, but I was a bit... Confused when I started reading.
Don't get the idea that I'm mean or something, but you should indicate when there's someone talking with an indicator. For example:
-Hello there. She says with a cocky smile.
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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RE: Detective of secrets II: Ball-an-itis - by Cath - 03-28-2016, 10:58 AM

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