03-28-2016, 10:58 AM
Hello!
Hi, it's me again. Your story was really funny, but I was a bit... Confused when I started reading.
Don't get the idea that I'm mean or something, but you should indicate when there's someone talking with an indicator. For example:
-Hello there. She says with a cocky smile.
Hi, it's me again. Your story was really funny, but I was a bit... Confused when I started reading.
Don't get the idea that I'm mean or something, but you should indicate when there's someone talking with an indicator. For example:
-Hello there. She says with a cocky smile.
Let's see the bright sight of this world!