03-14-2016, 03:53 PM
Hello dear!
My name is Cath, I do like stories and yours was pretty good. I write some novels in French but I'm sure I'm legit to make a critic. Your story was interesting, I got hooked up, but... I'm fond of details and scenery. If you could make more of them, it'll be great. Well, it's my personal view but at least it's constructive... A bit...
My name is Cath, I do like stories and yours was pretty good. I write some novels in French but I'm sure I'm legit to make a critic. Your story was interesting, I got hooked up, but... I'm fond of details and scenery. If you could make more of them, it'll be great. Well, it's my personal view but at least it's constructive... A bit...
Let's see the bright sight of this world!