02-24-2016, 09:01 PM
For a story as richly detailed and good as this, I lament the fact that the thread is titled "Lesbian Story" – this also leads into my only gripe with it, and I see it more as a comical touch, that the narrator has this internal crisis about being a lesbian or not. Oh, the false dichotomy of being straight or gay...
Really, though. Overall I thought The Audition a great story, and the climax was extremely hot. I think the dialogue exchanges impressed me most, how natural it felt to imagine the conversations. I really enjoyed it!
Really, though. Overall I thought The Audition a great story, and the climax was extremely hot. I think the dialogue exchanges impressed me most, how natural it felt to imagine the conversations. I really enjoyed it!
"Each night has one sound I know: the moon against the water like your cheek across mine in another life." – Sara Eliza Johnson