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09-26-2017, 03:29 AM (This post was last modified: 09-26-2017, 08:22 PM by nolie.)

The magic, abruptly it shatters
from behind a voice loudly chastises
come back, don't delay
you're too far away
your freedom is nearly in tatters

Our passion is quenched like a dam
this dystopian world is a sham
with complete supervision
our lives are a prison
in their shiny utopian glam

You pull me up close with a pout
stroking my finger in doubt
as your hand wraps around
a wordless thought sounds
between us as loud as a shout

Sometimes the only endeavour
that people take note of together
is silent in words
a protest in verbs
a blaring and visible venture

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The Challenge - by Emmie - 03-16-2016, 11:11 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 03-16-2016, 11:16 AM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-16-2016, 11:49 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-16-2016, 12:19 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 03-16-2016, 03:15 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-16-2016, 04:28 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-16-2016, 09:24 PM

RE: The Challenge - by belle - 03-16-2016, 10:46 PM

RE: The Challenge - by W1LL - 03-17-2016, 01:03 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-17-2016, 06:20 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 03-17-2016, 09:51 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-17-2016, 10:27 AM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-17-2016, 11:46 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 03-17-2016, 04:58 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-17-2016, 06:15 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-18-2016, 11:03 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Emmie - 03-18-2016, 12:11 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 03-18-2016, 01:27 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 03-18-2016, 05:06 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-18-2016, 05:27 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 03-18-2016, 05:37 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-18-2016, 10:54 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-19-2016, 03:24 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-19-2016, 03:52 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-19-2016, 04:43 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-19-2016, 09:10 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 03-20-2016, 10:59 AM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-21-2016, 10:02 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 03-20-2016, 12:03 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Emmie - 03-20-2016, 02:57 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-20-2016, 04:47 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-21-2016, 02:33 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-22-2016, 09:24 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-22-2016, 02:42 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 03-22-2016, 03:37 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 03-22-2016, 07:25 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-22-2016, 09:52 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-23-2016, 03:21 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 03-24-2016, 04:12 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-24-2016, 10:02 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-24-2016, 10:48 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-27-2016, 03:10 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 03-27-2016, 05:27 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 03-27-2016, 05:41 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 03-28-2016, 12:56 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Bansai - 03-28-2016, 07:31 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 03-28-2016, 08:55 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Emmie - 03-28-2016, 01:31 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 03-28-2016, 09:01 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 03-28-2016, 09:39 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 03-29-2016, 03:11 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-01-2016, 01:08 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 04-01-2016, 01:46 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 04-03-2016, 02:07 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-04-2016, 01:34 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 04-05-2016, 09:06 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 04-08-2016, 04:04 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 04-09-2016, 07:33 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 04-11-2016, 02:55 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-13-2016, 12:05 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 04-13-2016, 12:21 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 04-13-2016, 01:26 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 04-14-2016, 03:05 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 04-14-2016, 09:18 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-20-2016, 01:22 PM

RE: The Challenge - by flashy - 04-20-2016, 05:11 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 04-20-2016, 05:53 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 04-25-2016, 12:13 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 04-25-2016, 12:49 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-25-2016, 01:08 PM

RE: The Challenge - by IvanXLIV - 04-26-2016, 08:59 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 04-27-2016, 04:36 AM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 04-27-2016, 01:43 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 04-29-2016, 10:57 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 04-29-2016, 05:24 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 04-29-2016, 05:36 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-29-2016, 05:55 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 04-29-2016, 09:40 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 04-29-2016, 11:11 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-03-2016, 11:26 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 05-03-2016, 12:01 PM

RE: The Challenge - by RP_RICK - 05-03-2016, 08:54 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-04-2016, 12:09 PM

RE: The Challenge - by SimplyNate - 05-04-2016, 08:08 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 05-09-2016, 02:59 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 05-09-2016, 03:27 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-09-2016, 03:36 PM

RE: The Challenge - by RP_RICK - 05-09-2016, 10:10 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 05-10-2016, 01:29 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-10-2016, 01:41 PM

RE: The Challenge - by RP_RICK - 05-10-2016, 02:41 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 05-10-2016, 02:51 PM

RE: The Challenge - by RayL - 05-10-2016, 04:52 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-13-2016, 11:55 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 05-13-2016, 04:04 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 05-13-2016, 04:13 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-18-2016, 04:24 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 05-18-2016, 11:46 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-25-2016, 03:19 PM

RE: The Challenge - by RP_RICK - 05-25-2016, 08:27 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 05-27-2016, 10:18 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Lexirific - 05-27-2016, 11:35 AM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 05-28-2016, 06:02 PM

RE: The Challenge - by RP_RICK - 05-29-2016, 05:24 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 06-14-2016, 02:36 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 06-20-2016, 12:08 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 06-21-2016, 02:32 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 06-27-2016, 10:25 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 07-01-2016, 12:04 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 07-01-2016, 01:49 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Barbiesque - 07-01-2016, 06:01 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Barbiesque - 07-01-2016, 06:51 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 07-04-2016, 12:37 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 07-04-2016, 12:57 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 07-04-2016, 08:48 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Barbiesque - 07-05-2016, 05:22 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Vrook - 07-05-2016, 12:35 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Barbiesque - 07-05-2016, 12:59 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Willy_for_Boobies - 07-05-2016, 06:43 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 07-08-2016, 04:32 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 07-08-2016, 04:36 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 07-08-2016, 07:24 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 07-09-2016, 04:17 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Kyrios - 07-13-2016, 11:54 AM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 07-14-2016, 05:57 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Sharp - 07-27-2016, 12:06 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 08-10-2016, 02:13 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 08-24-2016, 10:10 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 08-25-2016, 05:05 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 11-07-2016, 09:03 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Haakon - 11-14-2016, 02:45 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 11-14-2016, 10:15 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Haakon - 11-16-2016, 02:39 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 01-17-2017, 03:05 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 01-18-2017, 05:11 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 01-21-2017, 06:58 PM

RE: The Challenge - by _Barbie_ - 01-22-2017, 04:06 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 01-23-2017, 02:46 AM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 01-23-2017, 09:16 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 01-24-2017, 04:18 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 01-24-2017, 05:48 PM

RE: The Challenge - by GuyByThePond - 02-08-2017, 03:35 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 02-14-2017, 04:24 AM

RE: The Challenge - by GuyByThePond - 02-14-2017, 12:22 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 02-14-2017, 01:06 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Orwell - 02-19-2017, 06:11 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 02-19-2017, 06:32 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 03-11-2017, 10:40 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 03-13-2017, 11:48 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Aneurismath - 03-20-2017, 09:48 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 04-03-2017, 09:37 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 04-03-2017, 10:31 AM

RE: The Challenge - by JohnSins - 04-03-2017, 11:02 AM

RE: The Challenge - by Fernins - 04-03-2017, 04:58 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cheshire_Smirk - 05-06-2017, 01:18 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Cath - 05-06-2017, 05:27 PM

RE: The Challenge - by Altaria - 05-06-2017, 10:17 PM

RE: The Challenge - by nolie - 09-26-2017, 02:02 AM

RE: The Challenge - by nolie - 09-26-2017, 03:29 AM

RE: The Challenge - by nolie - 09-27-2017, 03:37 AM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 02-04-2018, 06:46 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -Aragorn- - 04-22-2018, 04:13 AM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 01-07-2019, 06:22 PM

RE: The Challenge - by kyawGyi - 11-22-2019, 11:42 PM

RE: The Challenge - by -J- - 02-05-2020, 06:02 PM

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