I hadn't thought of it as a strophe, but you are correct it has that feel in the structure. Its hard to write this as there are so many strict structural components, rhyme scheme, linking lines and syllabic restraint mainly. When its finished these elements though should make the whole thing stand together as threads binding myriad pieces of cloth into a single garment. At least if I do it right.
I should also point out that I am not writing the Ascension series alone. I am having a huge amount of help with the story and having the verse proofread, with tweaks suggested by Alexa. Its a lot of fun to write and seeing the reactions of people (especially you Cath) to it is gratifying.
Writing this way is rewarding and also pressuring. Each time I finish one sonnet I feel that rush of completion, but there stands that lonely linking line, beckoning me onward, showing that I have more to write. So no sooner have I completed one, but I turn to the next and begin the climb again.
I should also point out that I am not writing the Ascension series alone. I am having a huge amount of help with the story and having the verse proofread, with tweaks suggested by Alexa. Its a lot of fun to write and seeing the reactions of people (especially you Cath) to it is gratifying.
Writing this way is rewarding and also pressuring. Each time I finish one sonnet I feel that rush of completion, but there stands that lonely linking line, beckoning me onward, showing that I have more to write. So no sooner have I completed one, but I turn to the next and begin the climb again.