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The Challenge
#11
With words as been risen an army
With words it shall be put to ground
Which will fall to infamy
Which will be heard out loud

Pieces of poems
Pieces of rhyme
How many ends
Could I make this mine

Now it's just nonense
What I write
Don't take offense
For this piece of mine
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#12
I must admit I borrowed the central concept for this piece from another poet in this very thread. *Hug* for you. Hope you enjoy what I've done with it.

With sure, eminent poise she walks abroad,
Her gliding step and grace never altered,
By the roaring passage of a fierce van,
Nor a shout ringing out from stunted grove,
Like a cat she prowls making all curious,
Then at the sharp ring of a bell she turns,
To see the approach of her bad boy, good.
#13
(Well done Bansai - I salute thee Cool )

A change of pacing, a pause
Emotions and feelings swell

Within me. What is the cause?
 
This fencer is distracted
By a fair maiden's favor;
Renewed passion impacted
 
With full force... Now my soul sings,
Ringing like a stricken bell
I have grown a set of wings
 
Above the melee I soar,
Aloft in the clear blue skies,
Exultant forevermore.


Ivan
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
#14
*clears her throat*

Making rhymes is a hobby,
If you want me to bend,
La poésie will be your end.
For sure, this will make me happy.

Every word has a meaning,
And with them you create beauty,
Thus it'll creates envy.
So be careful, I don't want to hurt your feeling.

Cocky, greedy, silly
All those things describes me,
That's how I shouldn't be,
However Cath is hungry!

Welp... Not my best shot, but I don't care.
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
#15
Thanks mate, and as usual, impressive piece as always. Really need to sharpen up to meet up to you folks' par xD
A wise man always say: 
"Make Love, Not War"
#16
What? Did the guns of war fell silent already?
Perhaps we should trade them all for entertainment
And switch our revels to dance... are you then ready
To bring this to a new level of merriment?
 
This would be fair, because my heart harkens music,
Filled with joy and contentment because of her...
So I dance now, a grandiose waltz most majestic
The ballroom's illuminated, the crowd gather
 
And we swirl together, duet of love reborn
Happy, oblivious of the audience attending;
We dance until the rising sun of dawn adorn
The sky, and we elope away in the morning.


Ivan
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
#17
*reveals herself from the shadows* So here I am again, with new words of encouragement, but also rules to shackle your minds creativity. For a challenge would not be a true challenge, were it not challenging! *smirks* From this point onwards, things will only get more difficult, but I hope you all enjoy yourselves, for that is after all the purpose! *slowly melding into the shadows again, leaving only the echo of an amused laughter*

I don't know if anyone spotted it, but my first poem was Acrostic, so if you read the first letter of each line, you got "Poetry Slam Yo"! The idea was for us to have a small Poetry Slam of our own, perhaps without winner? But Hopefully we can have fun, and maybe sharpen eachothers minds in the process? ^^

A short informative description of the plans I have for this thread. From now on, we will be adding rules every now and then. I will start us off, by adding the first rule (Theme: MnF). Then in a day or two, another person can add another rule of their choosing, but also change mine if they wish. So perhaps the next person will add a rule of Style (insert style), but also change the Theme to animals for example. I will also try to keep my first post updated with the current rules, so that there may be no confusion over it.

Theme: MnF

And my own contribution with the Theme of MnF in mind!

We live in fantasy, only in virtual memory
Here I can be true and leave my mask behind
Is this my reality, or just another reverie?

People pass me by, mere pixels of a neverending world
But as they are to me I am to them, another dot
We live in fantasy, only in virtual memory

If my feelings are real, does that mean this fantasy
Is just another form of my own existance?
Is this my reality, or just another reverie?

I created someone in my own image, more free than myself
I am a god of my own creation, a puppeteer
We live in fantasy, only in virtual memory

Perhaps I am not the puppeteer, but the puppetry
Freely dancing to the tune of my new master
Is this my reality, or just another reverie?

My feelings are conflicted and I, confused
I am at a crossroads, which path must I take?
We live in fantasy, only in virtual memory
Is this my reality, or just another reverie?
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#18
You talk about rules you say?
On this MnF world I see
There's nothing that we can't be

For every piece of mistery
I reveal a bit of curiosity
To know what hide thee

This shared virtual world
Leaves us open wide
But what could I be
In this mind of mine
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#19
Only about Meet and Fuck?
Emmie you are so sweet,
But talking about that worths a buck.
I wanted to write it in a heart beat.

This game, this forum,
It is the best thing,
In the game, I drink cum,
In here, only one feeling!
Being happy or dumb,
I don't care, it's interesting!

And this virtual world your talking,
Your reverie and puppetry, isn't that sad?
Our worlds are limitless, you can do both, good and bad.
But remember, they're all human being(s).

The worst that can happen is to not dream, it means that.
If you can't dream, there is no world worths living.

Mmh… I think I'll come up with something better next time.
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
#20
Boys and Girls of MnF

There are a few people that are not in here that I would have liked to add. People who I am growing closer to, but have not yet verse for. I shall write for you later.

The club itself is to me the people,
The people most important and most close,
The girls and boys who make my day special,
To each of you I dedicate this verse.

My Queen, my first, my special friend,
Each word from you a soft caress,
A lovers kiss, a veiled threat,
Each time you leave me wanting more
My smile broad, desire inflamed,
I thank you, love, for all of this.

I met you next, cutie,
Our exchanges all warm,
A friendship grown teasing,
You dressed me in white,
You gave to me delight,
Love you <3 for all of it.

Affection, attraction, adoration,
A deep abiding interest in your play,
You wanted to submit to bend to me,
To give you that I want more than I say,
I surrender, build a world for you to be,
And show you that I want you as you are.

Free verse for you dear,
Never to be owned or trapped,
Certainly not by me!
When I want you and you I its explosive,
Otherwise tender, or joking or absent,
Love it all, my inappropriately sexy cousin.

My language coach and provocateur,
J'aime beaucoup toi, ma belle amie,
J'aime bien ecrire en francais avec toi,
Please correct any errors you find,
And give me a hug and a smile,
You are a rather special lady to me. *Blink*

My respected mentor, most cherished friend,
Inspiration.
We started with darkness and fell into,
Dedication.
Your friendship is a pure, wonderful thing,
Affirmation.

My dear one, for you I write honestly,
A sharing of whole truths as is our way,
Its hard sometimes to express how good I feel,
You set my mind aflame with wondrous words,
You help me in more ways than you can know,
I love you.

You are a good man,
Hidden from the glare,
We bond over pain,
We bond over joy,
Your beach or my bridge,
That bond is special.

A co-conspirator a like minded soul,
I am glad our orbits crossed,
As we spun and whirled around another,
In a thund'ring tempest tossed,
I enjoy our talks of similarity,
And hope that you can say the same of me.

My little brother, wonderful wordsmith,
We share many things, some most special friends,
Some secrets and at least one adventure,
Our passionate praise and brilliant smiles,
You remind me to be me, a leaf, free,
I hope you know that I love you dearly.

Ninja, stealth presence,
You know who you are,
I'm glad I met you,
Pleased that I know you,
Hope that I help you,
Know you help me too.

Kouhai seems appropriate here my friend,
You tend to call me senpai after all,
I hope you have enjoyed the people sent,
To meet you or you to meet each of them,
I am glad to see our small network grow,
And hope to add more friends as we progress.


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