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Together (my love)
#1
Hello people,

Please don't hold it against me... but inspiration drives me to write and post, so do forgive me for adding yet another poem to the forum Rolleyes . As usual, your comments are always welcome.

Together

Sunset is here, setting ablaze the horizon
In hues of saffron and lavender darkening
The skies above. Evening stars alight, whereupon
Shadows secretive and silent start appearing.
 
    My step quickens, my heart soars, overwhelmed with joy
    As I hasten forward, imperceptibly drawn
    By the siren song of your presence, to enjoy
    The impending night, awaiting the coming dawn
 
        Together, my dearest love,
        Our two souls rejoined and whole.
 
Perhaps we shall talk the hours away, walking
Quietly under the cascading waterfall,
Dew-like droplets from the misty haze dampening
Your luscious hair, as your soft-spoken words enthrall
 
    Me completely; perhaps we shall repair instead
    To the sandy shores of the lagoon, entering
    The surf skyclad, our lover’s lustful embrace led
    By the slow, rhythmic tides of the sea, climaxing
 
        Together, my dearest love,
        Our two bodies merged as one.
 
Whether resting in your arms or captivated
By our shared anecdotes, in the throws of passion
Most rewarding, or pulling pranks unabated
On each other, laughing with playful abandon,
 
    Not a day goes by without you occupying
    My waking thoughts or deepest dreams; ‘tis destiny,
    Mi corazón, and I believe with increasing
    Conviction that we are indeed fated to be
 
        Together, my dearest love,
        Our two selves truly complete.

Ivan
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
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#2
(04-04-2016, 10:01 PM)IvanXLIV Wrote: Hello people,

Please don't hold it against me... but inspiration drives me to write and post, so do forgive me for adding yet another poem to the forum Rolleyes . As usual, your comments are always welcome.

Together

Sunset is here, setting ablaze the horizon
In hues of saffron and lavender darkening
The skies above. Evening stars alight, whereupon
Shadows secretive and silent start appearing.
 
    My step quickens, my heart soars, overwhelmed with joy
    As I hasten forward, imperceptibly drawn
    By the siren song of your presence, to enjoy
    The impending night, awaiting the coming dawn
 
        Together, my dearest love,
        Our two souls rejoined and whole.
 
Perhaps we shall talk the hours away, walking
Quietly under the cascading waterfall,
Dew-like droplets from the misty haze dampening
Your luscious hair, as your soft-spoken words enthrall
 
    Me completely; perhaps we shall repair instead
    To the sandy shores of the lagoon, entering
    The surf skyclad, our lover’s lustful embrace led
    By the slow, rhythmic tides of the sea, climaxing
 
        Together, my dearest love,
        Our two bodies merged as one.
 
Whether resting in your arms or captivated
By our shared anecdotes, in the throws of passion
Most rewarding, or pulling pranks unabated
On each other, laughing with playful abandon,
 
    Not a day goes by without you occupying
    My waking thoughts or deepest dreams; ‘tis destiny,
    Mi corazón, and I believe with increasing
    Conviction that we are indeed fated to be
 
        Together, my dearest love,
        Our two selves truly complete.

Ivan
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#3
More?

Just keep watching the "Creative Writing" subforum, lady!  Wink

Ivan
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
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#4
I will now! Blush
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#5
(04-04-2016, 10:01 PM)IvanXLIV Wrote: Hello people,

Please don't hold it against me... but inspiration drives me to write and post, so do forgive me for adding yet another poem to the forum Rolleyes . As usual, your comments are always welcome.

How dare you add something creative that you've written to the Creative Writing subforum!

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Very good as always.
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