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Winter promises - Anallee - 04-08-2016
To my abuser
Winter promises
Promises pour from your lips
like rain from the sky.
No need for nourishment now.
Abuse and neglect have taken their toll,
the garden you planted has withered and died.
Promises come easy now. I know. You're
afraid.
But promises kept, are better than made.
And, I've seen this storm before.
See what you've done!
Frozen and bare.
Now nothing remains for you here.
I am gone.
~Anallee
RE: Winter promises - Altaria - 04-08-2016
Very emotional and heart defiant piece. Hope everything is fine now.
RE: Winter promises - Anallee - 04-08-2016
(04-08-2016, 08:48 PM)Altaria Wrote: Very emotional and heart defiant piece. Hope everything is fine now.
It is. Thank you for your support. THAT means a lot
RE: Winter promises - Sate - 04-10-2016
I agree with Altaria. I am glad everything is better though. I'd offer a friendly hug if it would be accepted.
RE: Winter promises - Anallee - 04-10-2016
Thank you Sate.
*Hug accepted*. And here's one right back to you.
RE: Winter promises - Sate - 04-10-2016
(04-10-2016, 02:00 AM)Anallee Wrote: Thank you Sate.
Thank you Anallee Keep your chin up
RE: Winter promises - IvanXLIV - 04-10-2016
I'm sorry for you, lady Anallee...
Again, beautifully written.
I sincerely hope you will be able to move forward and leave this difficult and dead-ended relationship behind you. I would respectfully add my own friendly hug of comfort to those already offered to you...
Ivan
RE: Winter promises - Anallee - 04-10-2016
Sate
, what more can I say. And IvanXLIV thank you for your kind words and thoughts. All of it and all of you help more than you know.
RE: Winter promises - Simple Tania - 04-10-2016
another great poet who join our community, amazing, another one to make me cry and my paper tissues are flying...
Love this poem Anallee, very sentimental, very descriptive, beautiful and sad in the right amount...
RE: Winter promises - DarkXtecy - 04-10-2016
oh yeah..this one sounds more resilient...next one I would assume would be "full blossom"
also as you can see...the number of welcoming hands that have stretched out to you, so yes, you are in hands of a good family now
...btw thank you for your kind words on the previous post I will cherish those.hope to continue seeing your radiant smile, you as well as other awesome poets in here