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Thoughts - Altaria - 03-24-2016
It has been a long time since I posted one of my works here. This one is one of those really sappy ones, so yeah. It wasn't supposed to be in this style, but it's better to read it like that. So enjoy.
Lately I've been thinking a lot
Thinking about life, in what has gone and what will be
I figured I left behind small parts, simple but yet essential
The one I can't forget, that for being the most important, can change my life
He is everything I've been looking for, what I lack
He is the one that makes me soar higher and longer
The one who makes me smile with it's eyes
Thought I would find someone to take his place
But I was so wrong, so distracted
I remember the moments we spend together
What we talked, the promisses made and the letters written
There's so much I wanted to say to you, so much to show
But I got scared, ashamed
So I closed myself, locked until the day that we met once again
I regret the decision, for the rest of my days
Cause I just lost what I missed the most
I lost the love of my life
Wanted to tell you this and more
Show you everything I've to give
But it has been too long
And I lost hope of seeing you again
For that I suffer, for wasting this love, for ignoring it
I suffer for loving you
RE: Thoughts - IvanXLIV - 03-24-2016
Altaria,
Again, a marvelous piece, so emotionally charged... you moved me, lady.
Ivan