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Meeting - Altaria - 03-15-2016
Here goes a special one, to celebrate my day I give this to you all. It's a bit sappy (xD for lack of other word) but here goes.
At the airport I met you
At the airport I found myself
In your eyes I lost myself
In your smile I healed
For a long time I waited
For someone like this
Now that I found you
My search as reached its end
There's not a day that passes by
Where I don't see you at my side
You're my happiness
My own fairy tale
I wanted to tell you
What goes on my soul
Wanted to show you
What goes on my heart
Tried to go on with my life
Without your smile
But what I reaped
Was something I don't need
Tried to find another
To take your place
But I couldn't
And I ended up hurt
Now all that remains are memories
Pieces of moments
Where you were part of my world
Where my world was you
Can't think in anything else
I only see your smile
Your happiness
In all that surrounds me
I'm lost, weakened
Run away from love
What a foolish thing
To do
I need you
Your embrace
Stay with me
Stay at my side
RE: Meeting - Simple Tania - 03-15-2016
Alt sweetie, fabulous piece, love it, you are better and better, keep up...and im out of paper tissues, need to buy more
RE: Meeting - DarkXtecy - 03-15-2016
"hands Fenix my half used tissue" here hope this is ok...it still has a dry patch on it
... sorry just fooling with you as for the poem its really beautiful loved the beginning part most, thank you for celebrating your day with us with this wonderful poem
hope your days become better and better in future
RE: Meeting - Tantrum - 03-15-2016
Alt, love your poem, and like Dark said, thank you for celebrate your day with us, *stand up and bow*
RE: Meeting - IvanXLIV - 03-15-2016
Another beautiful piece, Altaria...
It stirred long-forgotten impressions I thought were buried with my youth; it felt good to experience them again.
Ivan