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So you found me again - Altaria - 03-02-2016
So you found me again
You brought your light bright smile
But my heart couldn't stand that vision
So I broke again, I lost myself again
My head can't stop thinking of you
My heart can't stay away from that feeling
And so I break again
And so I loose again
I know I'm not your dream girl
I know I have a ton of darkness in me
But would you give this poor girl
A fair chance at looking at your eyes
I don't ask for much
Cause what I want is your pure touch
I don't expect too much
Cause what I need is your loving touch
RE: So you found me again - 823 - 03-02-2016
A lovely contribution to the growing poetry circle here! I've felt feelings like this before; it isn't always about floating on cloud nine.
RE: So you found me again - Kyrios - 03-02-2016
I like that. Vulnerable, yet without the other perspective, not hopeless. Interesting.
RE: So you found me again - Simple Tania - 03-02-2016
Hi Altaria, great poem, lovely, personal, intimate...
RE: So you found me again - RP_RICK - 03-03-2016
Thank you for sharing my friend
Grande Abraço