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Clouds - brandon1op - 06-04-2016
Clouds
My head is in the Clouds
Whenever I think of her
Whether it be late at night
Or Early in the Day
Her kiss sends me far away
Sometimes she cries
and sometimes she Rumbles
But whenever I'm with her
She stops me when I crumble
Shes is my shade on a sunny day
and a Reminder of those above me
She will always be my special
Cloud
RE: Clouds - Cuylie - 06-05-2016
I really like the play of words in the entire first Stanza. I think that is my favorite part. Especially the rhyming couplet of Day and away.
RE: Clouds - Barbiesque - 06-05-2016
“The sky has a huge heart open for all clouds even on the gloomiest of days.” - Munia Khan
RE: Clouds - Lacivious - 06-06-2016
Aww thats really sweet <3
RE: Clouds - Cath - 06-06-2016
How long have you been making poems? I like them.
RE: Clouds - brandon1op - 06-07-2016
Like...9 days?