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More than affection - Altaria - 06-02-2016
Just sitting down on the usual place
Just talking about the silly things
I found myself moved by you
I found myself falling for you
I keep wondering if you know that
I keep imagining if you feel it too
You're so close to me at times
And now I'm confused
I enjoy your company more than usual
I don't know if that means I'm in love
But if you feel the same
Let us give this moment a place to grow
RE: More than affection - Sate - 06-02-2016
Nice piece Altaria Starfire
A budding love and wondering f it is mutual... I hope the words do not fall on deaf ears.
RE: More than affection - Lexirific - 06-02-2016
Ahhh, that moment... I hope that whatever it is you are feeling has a chance to grow, and is returned by the object of your (more than) affection.
RE: More than affection - Sharp - 06-02-2016
It can be a tricky place, first being unsure of another's feelings, and then being unsure of your own, not knowing just how deep they go.
But yes, give it time, nurture it, let it grow.
RE: More than affection - Emmie - 06-02-2016
*sniff sniff* I had such grand plans for you, my dragon. We would get hollywood contracts. Make dragon movies and be famous! But now I've lost you to some... Some... Some evil monster! >:c
RE: More than affection - Simple Tania - 06-02-2016
Hey! Alt is back in the business, what a lovely piece you wrote my dear, I say...GO FOR IT! we only live once *crossing fingers for you*
RE: More than affection - Seiryu - 06-02-2016
Thank you for this very nice poem Altaria and the for the feeling and message of timid hope.
RE: More than affection - RP_RICK - 06-03-2016
Sounds like the start of a very human and powerful experience...
Wishing you all it can bring you
RE: More than affection - Cheshire_Smirk - 06-05-2016
I am a pessimist. A staunch believer in Murphy's Law - after all, I find a strange psuedo-safety in knowing that once the worst happens it can't possibly get worse. That having been said, I do wish that the subject of your (heightened?) affection brings you plenty of joy and that for once you can be an exception to the rule as opposed to a victim of it. After all, hope is such a beautiful and human expression. Here's looking at you kid!
RE: More than affection - Cuylie - 06-05-2016
I also hope that whatever feelings you have also get the chance to take root and grow in the quiet moment that is provided.