Ephemeral - Printable Version +- MNF Club Forums (https://www.mnfclub.com/forum) +-- Forum: Forums (https://www.mnfclub.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=1) +--- Forum: Creative writing (https://www.mnfclub.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=5) +--- Thread: Ephemeral (/showthread.php?tid=917) |
RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-19-2016 (04-18-2016, 08:48 PM)misslanni Wrote: Anallee, I've been reading your poems and they tell a bittersweet story. You have a beautiful talent and I hope that soon, your muse will be the love and the warmth of your beloved. misslanni, Thank you. Coming from you makes this extra special. Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. It's taking a while this time. It still hurts every time I see this, even though it lives in my head now. RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-20-2016 (04-18-2016, 07:43 AM)Sharp Wrote: Following our recent conversations, your words are more powerful to me, and hit more strongly. I've been in this position myself, standing alone in a spot often shared with a loved one, longing for their return. And not knowing what face they may be wearing when they do just makes it so much harder. Thank you Sharp, Speaking with you has helped enormously. May our searches prove fruitful. ~ Analle (04-18-2016, 10:24 AM)DarkXtecy Wrote: I once knew of a lady who Dear Dark, Sorry to take so long to get back to you. The reason is somewhere in this thread. The important thing is it bothered me that I did not respond sooner. So, your first attempt at poetry you say. You have skillz you don't realise. I would like to see more. Only two people in my entire life have written a poem for me. Both here, and you are one of them. You two fight it out as to who is my first . Most importantly the heartfelt intent is there. I felt it and I love it. ~ Anallee RE: Ephemeral - DarkXtecy - 04-20-2016 (04-20-2016, 07:28 AM)Anallee Wrote:(04-18-2016, 10:24 AM)DarkXtecy Wrote: I once knew of a lady who Gorgeous Anallee (one with a radiant smile) Its ok hun...no need for sorry, I think you already mentioned thanks to every one earlier, and i know i was included in that, so pleas dont stress about it. And yes my first attempt in this forum....or second i think...i wrote one for Fenix as well but was shorter then this ..and honestly it only happens when feeling really hit deep inside, so in normal case, words just dont come out, but even when i do write it, I lack the structure to form it in words...and thank you I feel honored I was one of them. Am glade you loved it, i just hope you continue to get stronger as for the other guy, well there is just no way I can compete with him, words are my weakness, and i admit it lol. RE: Ephemeral - Sharp - 04-20-2016 (04-20-2016, 12:12 PM)DarkXtecy Wrote: Am glade you loved it, i just hope you continue to get stronger as for the other guy, well there is just no way I can compete with him, words are my weakness, and i admit it lol. Dark, poetry is in know way competitive, there is no winner or loser. The quality of the words and structure is irrelevant as long as the meaning gets across, which it most certainly has in your poem. As Anallee said "Most importantly the heartfelt intent is there. I felt it and I love it." And as for 'the other guy,' I'm sure they would hope only to inspire, as others have inspired them. Don't be afraid or hesitant. And to Anallee, see the power your words do, the journeys you take us on with each piece you write and share. RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-20-2016 (04-20-2016, 12:12 PM)DarkXtecy Wrote:(04-20-2016, 07:28 AM)Anallee Wrote:(04-18-2016, 10:24 AM)DarkXtecy Wrote: I once knew of a lady who ~Anallee (04-20-2016, 12:31 PM)Sharp Wrote:(04-20-2016, 12:12 PM)DarkXtecy Wrote: Am glade you loved it, i just hope you continue to get stronger as for the other guy, well there is just no way I can compete with him, words are my weakness, and i admit it lol. ~Anallee RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-20-2016 (04-18-2016, 07:54 PM)CBM97 Wrote: Ah... poems... The best ones I read were from broken heart, Well this one is a part of them now. Thank you CBM97. I am honoured at that. RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-21-2016 (04-18-2016, 07:50 PM)Altaria Wrote: Another heart melting piece from you Anallee I've been in that same situation before, yeah it sucks but keep strong and you'll find your way Thank you Altaria. Sorry it took so long to respond. RE: Ephemeral - Insydious - 04-22-2016 Wow Anallee. That was simply amazing. RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-22-2016 Hey Insydious, We see each other often and say Hey. That's all we say. Nice to have the opportunity to say more. RE: Ephemeral - Anallee - 04-23-2016 (04-18-2016, 08:06 AM)Slyvie Wrote: I love it Anallee, the poem, well, it's so well... balanced, and the idea of the place and the heartache :') I hope everything works out for you! But these were words from the soul, if ever there could be. Thank you Slyvie. Sorry it's taken a bit to respond. |